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Jay Lake
Date: 2007-05-08 19:41
Subject: [writing] Process notes -- ontology defenestrates phrenology
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manmela challenges me on my statements about Firefly being "rather mediocre science fiction". Not being a Browncoat loyalist, but making a larger point about what constitutes good science fiction. He says in part:

Star Wars and a bunch of other classic Sci-Fi movies would be terrible Science Fiction (ignore the fact that Star Wars is a space Western Fantasy)...and I just don't hold to that. Conversely, it you take any Science Fiction novel, I'm sure scientists could poke holes in the science. If they did, would it then be mediocre Science Fiction?


This is an interesting problem, and one that doesn't have a very useful answer. For one thing, I seem to fall back on the Potter Stewart test when considering what is science fiction: "I know it when I see it."

For the record, I think Star Wars is fairly poor science fiction, though the recent episodes are far more egregiously bad than the original three. The Trek franchise is kind of on the border for me. On the other hand, I thought Bladerunner was pretty good science fiction. Ditto Silent Running, although it fails as a movie for other reasons.

So what do I mean when I say this? I think I'm working from a fairly narrow definition of "science fiction" -- not hard SF, but at least somewhat durable. For example, I'd care to see my SF observe the laws of physics, or break them in internally defined ways -- the Trek warp drive is an example. This, incidentally, is where the Serenity movie failed repeatedly, ignoring issues of lightspeed lag, transit time, energy budgets, even the nature of gravity, all stuff that any moderately bright and attentive high school sophomore could have pointed out on a casual reading of the script. The science in the science fiction was abandoned for the sake of plot convenience or visual effects.

They didn't play fair with the rules of their own universe.

Compare to Bladerunner. The rubber science in that movie was deliberately set up -- the entire technology of replicants, for example. The areas that might have been more difficult, such as the references to interstellar colonization, were outside the immediate scope of the movie's narrative and as such were glossed over. It felt probable to me. Gravity worked, equipment behaved like equipment should (or shouldn't) and so on.

There is of course the "expert" problem. What Dr. Mike Brotherton, astronomy professor, sees in a space movie is very different from what I see in a space movie. What a medical professional sees is different. And so forth.

I suppose in one sense the problem is labelling.1 If I look at Serenity, Firefly and Star Wars without an expectation of a strong correspondence to some version of physics-friendly reality, they are all kinds of fun. Great story telling. Mythmaking. Fantasies of the technological age, fairy tales of the age of globalization and the dimmest glimmerings of life in the High Frontier.

But anything with a spaceship in it is by definition science fiction. The presence of a spaceship is almost the type specimen of science fiction.

So when I complain about Serenity, manmela hears me limiting our story telling avenues. I think I'm actually wibbling about literary ontology. I think I'm on to something here, but it is probably only the hoary "what is science fiction" chestnut wiggling in my hand.




1. the_flea_king has a take on the science fiction label which dovetails into this thought process a bit.
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manmela
User: manmela
Date: 2007-05-09 08:07 (UTC)
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Look what I've gone and started! Honestly, you can't take me anywhere. ;-)

I think the thing I take form this is that everyone's view of Science Fiction is different, that the definition is up to the reader. And that's fine. We can all disagree on what's a good book or not, so why can't we disagree on whether something is Science Fiction or not? I think we can.

For me (and there's probably exceptions to this rule which given time this definition would change into something completely different), Science Fiction is anything that involves technological devices that currently don't exist.

Now Serenity and Star Wars show the limits of cinema over literature. In a book, even if you don't want to bog down the main story, you could always include an appendix with all your science. However, in cinema you don't get that luxury. So both Serenity and Star Wars have to sacrifice science for story-telling because of their medium (and let's assume that we could have explained away all the science loopholes given time). Millions of people love them, and they love them as science fiction, so even if they don't hold to what someone's view of Science Fiction is, you can't discount them (I'm not saying you are doing this Jay, I'm talking in general terms).

Just about everyone I know loves these types of Science Fiction movies, and if you asked them they would say they loved Science Fiction. Yet, give them a Science Fiction novel, and in the majority of cases they'll not like it at all. So my worry here, sparked by Jay's initial comment, is that Science Fiction has a divide.

Maybe cinema has poisoned what people's view of Science Fiction is, but it throws up a red flag to me. If that's what the masses now like, I think the literary community has to acknowledge that. Now Jay's entitled to his opinion, and in many ways I do agree with him on a lot of his points. The reason I write is because I think literature has less constraints than cinema and television. But if Star Wars and Serenity teach me anything, it's that story-telling is more important than the science.

Feel free to disagree!
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In a heaven of people only some want to fly
User: chipmunk_planet
Date: 2007-05-09 15:24 (UTC)
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"story-telling is more important than the science"

Exactly. There's nothing wrong with getting the facts right (and it makes the story more fun if you do), but if you don't tell a good story you might as well write a science text instead.
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Jay Lake
User: jaylake
Date: 2007-05-09 15:27 (UTC)
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I guess for me getting the facts right is part of telling a good story. I'm perfectly willing to accept all manner of variance from empirical reality (duh), but I expect internal consistency and some understanding of why or how reality varies. "Plot convenience" doesn't hold water for me as a reader/viewer.
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Gary Emenitove
User: garyomaha
Date: 2007-05-09 17:04 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
>>"Plot convenience" doesn't hold water for me as a reader/viewer.<<

Apologies if this is too far off topic, but...

Is there a name for a story -- I'm thinking of TV episodes -- where the situation is apparently hopeless until some new element is introduced near the very end of the episode and -- **miraculously** -- all is made right just before the end credits?

M. and I found this to be true in a great many Star Trek episodes (in its many incarnations) and it occurs in non-SF-related programs, too.

Why can't scriptwriters plant the clues and build up to the solution? Why must they "save the day" with all-new info so late into the plot?

Thank you for letting me vent. Carry on.
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Jay Lake
User: jaylake
Date: 2007-05-09 17:07 (UTC)
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Are you thinking of deus ex machina?
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Gary Emenitove
User: garyomaha
Date: 2007-05-09 19:17 (UTC)
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That seems to fit, thanks, but in the case of Trek it usually seems more like an escape hatch for writers, rather than a clever plot device for a satisfying "Aha! moment."
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In a heaven of people only some want to fly
User: chipmunk_planet
Date: 2007-05-10 02:54 (UTC)
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Oh, I totally agree. I very much dislike inconsistent 'world building'. The flip side of it is some people's criticism of hard SF, where all the facts are right but the characters are two-dimensional and the plot is thin. You still have to tell a story if you want to call it a story, or your reader isn't going to be happy. :)


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