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Jay Lake
Date: 2008-06-05 17:44
Subject: [process] The plot diamond
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I had lunch with [info]kenscholes today. As usual we spoke of many things; ships and shoes and sealing wax at a minimum. As is so often the case when Trailer Boy and I are hanging out, we got to talking about beginnings, middles and ends of books, specifically from the auctorial perspective. He commented on the fact that when the book gets into the final act, he writes much faster to close out the story than he does at the beginning when he's still entering the story.

I agreed this was completely natural, and made the observation that plots are essentially shaped like diamonds. In the first act, you open a door to enter the narrative, only to face an endless variety of choices for character, action, setting, problems, solutions, what have you. These options burgeon before you, the writer, and you must not only choose them, but allow them to multiply like rabbits until you reach the level of complexity which makes the work interesting and sustains the interesting aspects of the story.

The second act is where you (mostly) stop throwing open new doors and begin to concentrate on what all those choices mean to the characters and their story. This is the waist of the diamond. The famous "muddle in the middle" comes from this shift in both momentum and direction, when the author has to figure out what the heck it all means and drive the story in some direction or another.

The third act comes back together, the possibilities of the plot being pruned off one by one, until it narrows to a conclusion balancing between dramatic inevitabily and surprise. Like all good endings, it reflects the beginning — the other tip of the plot diamond.

Like so:

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Thoughts? Corrections? Comments?

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melissajm
User: [info]melissajm
Date: 2008-06-06 01:09 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

I tend to write slower as I get closer to the end, trying to make everything "stick." Of course, I'm also not all that great of a writer yet! Maybe focus becomes second nature with practice?

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Brenda Cooper: color head shot
User: [info]bjcooper
Date: 2008-06-06 01:25 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:color head shot

Yep- I agree. In fact, I'm feeling just that since I'm right at the waist of my curent book.

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Peter Hollo
User: [info]frogworth
Date: 2008-06-06 02:17 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

It looks like a snake swallowing an elephant.

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Andrew Trembley
User: [info]bovil
Date: 2008-06-06 02:44 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

In a bit of self-referential weirdness, The protagonist in Clive Barker's Imajica posits that all novels start out as the story of one person, that then becomes the story of two people, and three people (and more) but eventually returns to being about two people and at the end is back to being about the original person.

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User: [info]mythusmage
Date: 2008-06-06 16:50 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Have you read Thomas Harlan's Oath of Empire? It starts out with a teenaged boy from Hibernia learning magic at an Egyptian school, but ends with a character introduced in a scene where he was supposed to be a sounding board for a minor continuing character. Tom did a bit of research on this character (an historical personage) and the course of the core tale changed.

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bondo_ba
User: [info]bondo_ba
Date: 2008-06-06 14:40 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

I agree completely - same thing happens to me.

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Elf M. Sternberg
User: [info]elfs
Date: 2008-06-06 16:46 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

How would one construct such a plot diamond when writing in, say, the first person, or in tight third with a single POV?

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Jay Lake
User: [info]jaylake
Date: 2008-06-06 17:06 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

While there are undeniably significant differences in book structure based on person and POV, I think the general idea of a plot opening up at the beginning and narrowing at end holds up across the spectrum. There are certainly differences (multiple volumes of single plot arc, for example), and it's probably worth digging into, but the underlying model feels solid to me.

Does it look different to you?

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In a heaven of people only some want to fly
User: [info]chipmunk_planet
Date: 2008-06-06 22:15 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

I love the diagram.

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hkneale
User: [info]hkneale
Date: 2008-06-07 10:31 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Yeah.

I tend to write faster at the end when I'm wrapping up the plot(s). The part I'm slowest at is the very beginning as I try to form the point of my diamond without it being too long and spindly or too dull. I'm somewhat slower in the latter half of the middle as well as I try to figure out how the story's supposed to end. Once I know that, I rip.

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