Still, it's close, very close. This was as bad as writing a book, albeit somewhat less time consuming. And lemme tell you, writing in public is something else. I thought I'd done it before, but I've never been as exposed as on this piece.
Most of all, my profound gratitude to those who had time and energy to read the story. I was on a short deadline with a new writing process in play, and this needed some very careful attention. Thank you very much for your support.