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jaylake |
2007-11-11 03:07 (UTC) |
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Extratextual context: The line is from a sailor's inner monolog written in fairly tight third. Also, when I wrote it, I was thinking of the Leonard Cohen's Suzanne:
And Jesus was a sailor when He walked upon the water
And He spent a long time watching from his lonely wooden tower
And when He knew for certain only drowning men could see Him
He said, "All men will be sailors then until the sea shall free them."
But He, Himself, was broken long before the sky would open
Forsaken, almost human, He sank beneath your wisdom like a stone
Edited at 2007-11-11 03:08 am (UTC)
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