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Jay Lake
Date: 2007-12-11 17:23
Subject: [wip] A tiny snippet from Green
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Location:Fireside Lodge Coffee House
Mood:busy
Music:coffee house radio
Tags:green, wip, writing
"I am playing at soldiers," I told him the third day he'd tolerated my presence at his forge.

He was a huge man, in the manner of smiths everywhere I was to eventually learn. His hair was pale, though always slicked dark with sweat, and his eyes the cutting blue of a gemstone. "Aye, and is yer winning, missy?"

"No one wins at war," I told him primly. "Some lose less than others, if they are lucky."

The smith chuckled. "And I am seeing why the dandy man has taken such a liking to yer."

'Dandy' was a new word to me. I set it aside for later consideration. I knew I should not ask Federo why the smith had called him so.

"He is good to me," I lied. "But he will not play at soldiers with me."
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jeffsoesbe: kojak serious
User: jeffsoesbe
Date: 2007-12-12 06:27 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:kojak serious
These snippets (here and earlier) are first draft?

Dang, man. You are obviously a trained pro-fessional.

laboring along,

- yeff
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Jay Lake
User: jaylake
Date: 2007-12-12 14:16 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Yep, raw feed. From my fingertips to your eyeballs.
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