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Jay Lake
Date: 2008-02-20 18:10
Subject: [writing] Dept of "was I drunk when I wrote this?"
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Location:Nuevo Rancho Lake (for a little while longer)
Mood:laughing
Music:me typing
Tags:madness, writing
Fugly sentence of the day: "They were answered by patterned toots from the steamers."

Thank god for revisions...
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robin catesby
User: deedop
Date: 2008-02-21 02:49 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Man, I'm eating at the wrong clam shacks.
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User: n5red
Date: 2008-02-21 02:50 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
It makes sense to me...

One of us should be very afraid.
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Patrick, The Space Lord
User: robot_scandal
Date: 2008-02-21 02:52 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
I'm not sure if this is helpful, but you might try -


The patterned toots of steamers answered like a cacophony of popping salad tomatoes in a microwave.
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Patrick, The Space Lord
User: robot_scandal
Date: 2008-02-21 02:54 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
The patterned toots of steamers answered like a cacophony of salad tomatoes popping in a microwave.


Ah - even better.
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Andrew Trembley
User: bovil
Date: 2008-02-21 03:00 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
"Toots" and "steamers." How Beavis & Butthead of you...
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calendula_witch: wine
User: calendula_witch
Date: 2008-02-21 03:17 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:wine
Wait--we're NOT supposed to write drunk? Oh now you tell me!
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russ: watchmen
User: goulo
Date: 2008-02-21 07:08 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:watchmen
At least you didn't write "poots" or "poops".
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Misty Marshall
User: mistymarshall
Date: 2008-02-21 07:09 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Lol ..patterned toots...hee the image i have with that one....

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Lawrence M. Schoen
User: klingonguy
Date: 2008-02-21 12:25 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
toots? toots? good lord, man, those were bleats!.
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