[writing] Progriss riport

Have been hammering on Green much of the afternoon and evening, mostly hunting down passive voice and writerly tics. Them style-driven line edits can be a bitch. And I know I'll miss stuff even so.

Expect to get to some deep cutting tomorrow at the coffee house, after a trip to my stylist.

And

casacorona, I'll quit it with the bright ideas for now. Wouldn't you rather have a book? :D

PS: Yes, I've added a "hair" tag to this post.