Jay Lake (jaylake) wrote,
Jay Lake
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[writing] Alliteration failure

Important safety tip: sometimes it’s just not a good idea to say what comes into your head. From this early morning’s work on Tourbillon:

Her approval thrilled Boaz, sending an unexpected crackle through his crystals.

Don’t you just love it when something sends a crackle through your crystals?

Originally published at jlake.com. You can comment here or there.

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