[writing] Progris riport, day 5, revising Tourbillon

Six chapters on close line-edit today, along with various outbursts of writing-related program activities. Going to knock off now to rest my brain and shift gears to do some Endurance brainstorming with calendula_witch. And read part of Watchmen, since I've managed to replace my missing copy of the graphic novel.

Once I'm done with this read of Tourbillon (Wednesday, possibly), I'm going to go back for another pass to excise larger chunks. I need it firmly in my head first, though.

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