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Jay Lake
Date: 2009-09-10 19:05
Subject: [writing] And we have a short story
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Tags:process, stories, wip, writing
For now, at least. I fear the rewrite. At any rate, "Torquing Vacuum" came in at 5,800 words in first draft.

A bit of wip:
Well away from the locks-and-docks sector, he finally let go of Austen. Kid would be bruised for sure. "Alright then," Spanich said. "You're on your own."

"Wh-what?" Austen seemed dazed.

"Snap out of it, kid. You're free." Spanich swatted him on the ass. "Now time to scoot."

"But I don't know where to go."

"Sure you do. You been living on Estacada Orbital for months." Platinum-coated genetics or not, the kid had survived on his own. Hustling wasn't the worst way to get by.

Originally published at jlake.com.

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User: beth_bernobich
Date: 2009-09-11 11:23 (UTC)
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Heh. I just finished a novelette, and I too fear the rewrite.

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