Jay Lake (jaylake) wrote,
Jay Lake
jaylake

Gratuitous weirdness

Working through the reader comments on Stemwinder, I find this note: "That is gratuitously weird" appended to this line:

Pillars lay broken on the ground, overgrown with vines and clinging flowers the color of a dog's tongue.

:: laughing ::
Tags: stemwinder, writing
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