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Jay Lake
Date: 2007-02-19 19:45
Subject: Gratuitous weirdness
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Tags:stemwinder, writing
Working through the reader comments on Stemwinder, I find this note: "That is gratuitously weird" appended to this line:

Pillars lay broken on the ground, overgrown with vines and clinging flowers the color of a dog's tongue.

:: laughing ::
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User: tillyjane
Date: 2007-02-20 04:00 (UTC)
Subject: clinging flowers
seems to me that its wierd for flowers rather than vines to be clinging. gratuitous, I dont know, wierd, yes.

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Jay Lake
User: jaylake
Date: 2007-02-20 04:13 (UTC)
Subject: Re: clinging flowers
Mmm. Good point. Have fixed.
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robin catesby
User: deedop
Date: 2007-02-20 04:24 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Y'know, if those flowers are the color(s) of my dog's tongue, they must be some seriously gratuitously weird flowers.
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jtdiii
User: jtdiii
Date: 2007-02-20 04:32 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
If they think that is weird... they have never had you GM a game. particularly one based on your dreams. :)
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bodandra: the night of a party
User: bodandra
Date: 2007-02-20 04:39 (UTC)
Subject: GM
Keyword:the night of a party
I think that is weird also ... Your sense of humor ...
giggling - time for bed here
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jtdiii
User: jtdiii
Date: 2007-02-20 06:43 (UTC)
Subject: Re: GM
Yeah well I have role played in his nightmares... I know of what I speak. :)
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Jay Lake
User: jaylake
Date: 2007-02-20 05:12 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
You want much more gratuitously weird than that, I'm afraid I'll have to refer you to the Flowers books...you want two-fisted clockpunk and international intrigue, Mainspring and Stemwinder are your source.
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floatingtide: Alien
User: floatingtide
Date: 2007-02-20 06:32 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:Alien
To bad it's not a comment on the whole book. I'd make a great cover blurb

"This is gratuitously weird"
--famous author
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Rose Fox
User: rosefox
Date: 2007-02-20 12:06 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Please to note that millions of us readers have no fuckin' clue what color a dog's tongue is.
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Patron Saint of Pessimism
User: woodrunner
Date: 2007-02-21 00:29 (UTC)
Subject: Is the dog's tongue colour:
Chow-Chow tongue black, Shih-Tzu tongue rosewater pink, or...

*looks into puppy's mouth*

Border Collie red, liberally peppered with remnants of grass torn up from beneath a foot or so of snow?

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